How about this one? The diagram can be found online btw, I just give it a touch of color 😉
@veronica You shifted some colors, but not all. So, to start with keep the colors for all the movable signs the same, then the colors in all the fixed signs the same, then the colors in all the dual signs the same.
In the very first chart you made, the problem you had was that you coloured all the movable signs red, except for Aries. Then all the fixed signs were coloured blue, except for Taurus.
In the second chart, all the movable signs are coloured red except Cancer, and all the fixed signs are coloured blue except Leo.
Only color first and see if you can see the aspects without drawing the lines. So all the movable signs will aspect the fixed signs except for the one next to it. Same with the Fixed signs.
I have uploaded an image. Can you see that all the greens will aspect all the reds except the one next to it? All the reds will aspect all the greens except the one next to it. And all the orange will aspect each other.
You can add lines if you want to, but I would keep them light and not overpowering. Perhaps only draw from one sign to keep it simpler to start with.